Derek
woke up, went downstairs and ate his cat.
Derek
woke up, went downstairs and ate. His cat was playing in his
cereal bowl.
His cat was playing.
In his cereal bowl Derek had his favourite nan.
In his cereal bowl
Derek had his favourite. Nan had bought it him. On the radio
Derek could hear his favourite pop Singer - his mum.
On the radio Derek
could hear his favourite pop singer. His mum was hoovering up
his dad.
His mum was hoovering
up. His dad was smoking the front door.
His dad was smoking.
The front door bell went outside.
The front door bell
went. Outside Derek could hear talking. It was his sister's
coat.
It was his sisters.
"Coat please Mum," said Tina. Mum said, "Put
the cups away out in the garden."
Mum said, "Put
the cups away." Out in the garden it was raining people.
Out in the garden
it was raining. People stood out in the street waiting for the
arrival of the bus stop.
People stood out
in the street waiting for the arrival of the bus. "Stop
dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late yesterday."
"Stop dawdling
Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late." Yesterday
Derek had been off school with a cold dad.
Yesterday Derek had
been off school. Dad said his teacher cried.
Dad said his teacher
cried out to him at the school gate that Derek had missed a
lesson on reading.